Feedback on WEB sites:

Aaron Abbate:  This does a reasonable job of introducing Aaron, although I don't like the brown background much.  The link to Madden 2004 doesn't work for me.   The title to one picture should be "My Girlfriend and Me" (not I).

Elizabeth Alchin:  This is a beginning, but we need more.  How about some links?

Jennifer Batavic:  I can't find your page, is it up somewhere?

Stacey Brockenbrough:  AOL version.  I would like a picture. I would really like to see your name on the site! All caps isn't usually recommended and I think it would be better with small letters.  The content is quite interesting and revealing of your personality.

Elizabeth Brood.  this is poetic and reflects your personality, but we need more.  How about a picture?  You said you were working on it, and I'll keep looking.  ...  Now I see it has links

Megan Ducoff:  This makes good use of the Geocities formats, but a picture of you would be better.  Your comments give a feeling for your personality, this sort of rambling is acceptable for a personal WEB page.

Chris Heide:  Another good use of Geocities, complete with photo.  Your writing is good, well organized and to the point and unpretentious.  Maybe I'll see you at Murphy's some time.

Jay Herman:  Short and to the point, but it works.  No links.

Erin Jones:  To my taste it is a bit cluttered, perhaps reflecting your apparent ennui.  I hope this is a passing mood.  Could you tell us what the pictures mean to you, I don't get the same feeling you apparently do from them.

Kim Jones:  A nice clear white background and crisp, clear and quite brief description of yourself.  How about a picture and some more content?

Anatoly Kliger:  can't find yours.

Candice Lucente:  That's an impressive picture - how did you do it?  I would hope you wouldn't be tired of life or work by 21!  "all your life" seems short from my perspective.  How did you do the little box that refers people to different pages?
What software did you use for this?

Akilah Massey:  Another good use of the Geocities template.  I like having a real picture. You mention going to school in the evenings, but this class must be an exception.  Your writing is clear and straightforward, but we could use more of it.

Abby Romberg:  Another good Geocities template.  Your writing is clear and straightforward.  "shopping" has two p's, however. 

Mike Torrice:  This is a beginning.  Are you sure you want to go climbing again?  Chess is a good hobby - not many injuries.  The template you used is set up for links to related pages.  We could use some more, and some links.

Alexis Tumolo:  Another Geocities template.  These get repetitive after awhile, but they work well enough.  How about a real picture?  Your text is the bare minimum... 


Grading:  These are your personal pages, so they should reflect your taste, not mine.  The main thing was to get them up.  I took of 10 points for no picture, 10 points for a very short text, and 10 points if there were no links.  The grades are in WEBCT, and I can raise them if you let me know you've added to the site.