TED GOERTZEL>>I am going to throw out some questions which are similar to those on the test
TED GOERTZEL>>I will ask people to answer them.
TED GOERTZEL>>If it gets too crowded, I'll ask specific people.
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TED GOERTZEL>>In the global brain movie, people were seen as analagous to which component of the brain?
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TED GOERTZEL>>Nobody r emembers?
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DAVID WILSON>>People was seen as brain cells.
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TED GOERTZEL>>David is right, al though these cells are called neurons.
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TED GOERTZEL>>It also said that the number of people on earth was about the same as the number ofneurons in one brain
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TED GOERTZEL>>Another question
TED GOERTZEL>>What are some of the different organizational structures used to str
TED GOERTZEL>>to structure an essay?
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MICHAEL BRADIS>>outline
JILLIAN GRECO>>compare and contrast
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>persuasive
KELLY KROEPER>>idea map
KATIE BRENNAN>>brainstorm
RYAN EVANS>>outline
TED GOERTZEL>>An outline is a technique, I'm getting at how you organize it.
SHAHRIAR MAHMUD>>outline
TERRI ANN--SAUTTER>>introduction
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TED GOERTZEL>>I had in mind the following: cause and effect, narration, definition, examples and illustration, comparison and contrast, classification and division, free association.
TED GOERTZEL>>Any of these could be used for persuasion or for description or for other purposes
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TED GOERTZEL>>Suppose we consider the essay that argued that television violence was harmful
TED GOERTZEL>>Which organizational structure did it use? From the list above?
ASHLY BURLINGAME>>persuasion
DARA SILICH>>examples and illustration
ANTHONY MANNELLO>>cause and effect
COLLEEN REDMAN>>cause and effect
KELLY KROEPER>>cause and effect
KATIE BRENNAN>>cause and effect
KARLA BLEVINS>>cause and effect
REBECCA MOULDER>>examples and illustration
KIMBERLY YUMUL>>cause and effect
TERRI ANN--SAUTTER>>cause and effect
TED GOERTZEL>>Yes, cause and effect. It was arguing that the cause TV violence effected behavior
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LAUREN DEL--CONTE>>cause and effect
TED GOERTZEL>>There were some examples there too, of course, but the basic logic of the argument was to prove causation.
TED GOERTZEL>>How abut in Fulano's essay "Growing Up in the Peanut Gallery"? Which structure did it use?
TED GOERTZEL>>Choose from cause and effect, narration, definition, examples and illustration, comparison and contrast, classification and division, free association.
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>examples and illustration
RODNEY WASHINGTON>>comparison and contrast
KATIE BRENNAN>>narration
TERRI ANN--SAUTTER>>examples and illustration
ASHLY BURLINGAME>>examples
KELLY KROEPER>>examples and illustration
DARA SILICH>>examples
LAUREN DEL--CONTE>>examples
TED GOERTZEL>>Yes, examples and illustration.
RODNEY WASHINGTON>>could be examples too
RYAN EVANS>>examples and illustration
SHAHRIAR MAHMUD>>example
REBECCA MOULDER>>examples
RYAN EVANS>>yesss
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TED GOERTZEL>>What would the script of a typical episode of Desperate Housewives use as an organizational principle?
TED GOERTZEL>>choose one: cause and effect, narration, definition, examples and illustration, comparison and contrast, classification and division, free association.
DARA SILICH>>narration
TERRI ANN--SAUTTER>>narration
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>narration
REBECCA MOULDER>>narration
LAUREN DEL--CONTE>>pariso
YEVGENYA POPOV>>narration
CHRISTIE HENNING>>narration
KELLY KROEPER>>narration
KIMBERLY YUMUL>>narrarion
ASHLY BURLINGAME>>narration
KATIE BRENNAN>>narration
LAUREN DEL--CONTE>>narriation
RYAN EVANS>>narration
TED GOERTZEL>>Yes, the answer is narration. It is telling a story, first this happened, then that happened, etc.
TED GOERTZEL>>The Taking Sides book as a whole is organized according to which principle?
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>comapre and contrast
KELLY KROEPER>>compare and contrast
COLLEEN REDMAN>>compare and contrast
RODNEY WASHINGTON>>definitoio
DARA SILICH>>compare and contrast
ASHLY BURLINGAME>>compare and contrast
KIMBERLY YUMUL>>compare and contrast
RODNEY WASHINGTON>>definition
VINCENZO CUTIETTA>>examples and illustrations
JILLIAN GRECO>>examples
LAUREN DEL--CONTE>>examples
KATIE BRENNAN>>compare and contrast, exmaple and illustrations
ANTHONY MANNELLO>>compare and contrast
MICHAEL BRADIS>>examples
RODNEY WASHINGTON>>or compare and contrast
REBECCA MOULDER>>cause and effect
TED GOERTZEL>>I think they are cause and effect essays, that's what they are arguing about.
TED GOERTZEL>>
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>why aren't they comparing different ideas
TED GOERTZEL>>but it might vary from essay to essay
TED GOERTZEL>>Some of them do compare and contrast
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>for the test would you accept more than one answer
TED GOERTZEL>>The Penguin manual uses what geometric principle to describe the rhetorical process?
KELLY KROEPER>>triangle
TED GOERTZEL>>No, Shareda, most questions have one answer. I may have to delete that one.
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TED GOERTZEL>>What are the three points on the triangle called (in Greek)?
DAVID WILSON>>ethos, pathos, logos
KELLY KROEPER>>pathos, ethos and logos
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>pathos ethos and logos
REBECCA MOULDER>>ethos pathos logos
JILLIAN GRECO>>ethos pathos and logs
TED GOERTZEL>>Who can define pathos?
CHRISTIE HENNING>>pathos ethos logos
LAUREN DEL--CONTE>>pathos ethos logos
RODNEY WASHINGTON>>pathos egos logos
RODNEY WASHINGTON>>i mean ethos
MICHAEL BRADIS>>audience
CHRISTIE HENNING>>appeals to the belifs and values of the audience
KARLA BLEVINS>>appeals to beliefs and values of the audience
DAVID WILSON>>writing to the audience
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JILLIAN GRECO>>trying to appeal to the audience
REBECCA MOULDER>>beliefs and values
KIMBERLY YUMUL>>appeals to the beliefs and values of the audience
TED GOERTZEL>>They are all appeals to the audience, pathos means appealing to biases, feelings of the audience
TED GOERTZEL>>Kimberly, are you looking in the book?
TED GOERTZEL>>That's OK today
KIMBERLY YUMUL>>no
TED GOERTZEL>>What does logos mean?
TED GOERTZEL>>Kimberly, your answer was right on?
RODNEY WASHINGTON>>appeals to logic or reasoning
COLLEEN REDMAN>>logic and reasoning
KELLY KROEPER>>logic of the paper
DARA SILICH>>logic
REBECCA MOULDER>>logic and reasoning
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KARLA BLEVINS>>appeals to logic, reasoning and evidence on the subject
LAUREN DEL--CONTE>>logic and reasoning
DAVID WILSON>>logos meaning appeal to the speaker emotions
ASHLY BURLINGAME>>logic and reason
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>appeals to logic
CHRISTIE HENNING>>logic reasoning and evidence
TED GOERTZEL>>Correct, logic and reasoning. What does ethos mean?
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>appeals to emotion
LAUREN DEL--CONTE>>emotion
KELLY KROEPER>>the feelings/emotions
ANTHONY MANNELLO>>emotion
KIMBERLY YUMUL>>character and expertise
KARLA BLEVINS>>character and expertise of the writer
RODNEY WASHINGTON>>when two people feel the same way
TED GOERTZEL>>Ethos means appeals to the expertise and character of the writer
TED GOERTZEL>>Which appeal do the essays in Taking Sides use?
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>pathos and logos
DAVID WILSON>>appeals to audience
TED GOERTZEL>>Ethos, pathos, logos, all of the agove or none of the above?
KARLA BLEVINS>>ethos
DARA SILICH>>all of the above
RODNEY WASHINGTON>>all
KELLY KROEPER>>ethos
YEVGENYA POPOV>>logos
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>all above
KIMBERLY YUMUL>>all
TERRI ANN--SAUTTER>>all
LAUREN DEL--CONTE>>all
KATIE BRENNAN>>a;; of the above.
ANTHONY MANNELLO>>all
ASHLY BURLINGAME>> all
JILLIAN GRECO>>all of them
CHRISTIE HENNING>>ethos and logos
TED GOERTZEL>>They use all of them, some more than others.
REBECCA MOULDER>>all of them
TED GOERTZEL>>When an essay quotes a lot of statistical studies, which is it using?
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>logos
DARA SILICH>>logos
KARLA BLEVINS>>logos
COLLEEN REDMAN>>logos
DAVID WILSON>>logos
KELLY KROEPER>>logos
TED GOERTZEL>>I would agree, logos.
KIMBERLY YUMUL>>logos
VINCENZO CUTIETTA>>logos
LAUREN DEL--CONTE>>logos
VINCENZO CUTIETTA>>logos
REBECCA MOULDER>>logos
TED GOERTZEL>>When it cites some terrible examples of how people's lives were ruined, which is it using?
KELLY KROEPER>>ethos
REBECCA MOULDER>>ethos
DAVID WILSON>>pathos
JILLIAN GRECO>>ethos
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>ethos
LAUREN DEL--CONTE>>ethos
ASHLY BURLINGAME>>ethos
RODNEY WASHINGTON>>ethos
COLLEEN REDMAN>>ethos
KATIE BRENNAN>>ethos
KARLA BLEVINS>>ethos
VINCENZO CUTIETTA>>ethos
ANTHONY MANNELLO>>ethos
KIMBERLY YUMUL>>ethos
CHRISTIE HENNING>>pathos
DARA SILICH>>ethos
TED GOERTZEL>>I think that would be pathos, it is designed to stir up feelings
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>i thought emotions were related to ethos
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TED GOERTZEL>>When the introduction to an essay says "the author of Professor of Communications at X University, which is it using"?
YEVGENYA POPOV>>ethos
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KATIE BRENNAN>>ethos
RYAN EVANS>>ethos
KIMBERLY YUMUL>>ethos
DARA SILICH>>logos
KELLY KROEPER>>ethos
ASHLY BURLINGAME>>ethos
LAUREN DEL--CONTE>>logos
COLLEEN REDMAN>>logos
REBECCA MOULDER>>ethos
RODNEY WASHINGTON>>pathos
KARLA BLEVINS>>ethos
TED GOERTZEL>>Yes, appeals to the expertise of the speaker are ethos.
TED GOERTZEL>>Let's look at the authors in the Taking Sides book
TED GOERTZEL>>Fowles argued that media violence is not really harmful
TED GOERTZEL>>What were his main po ints?
REBECCA MOULDER>>finds that the research was less convincing
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>because the environment has more effect
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TED GOERTZEL>>right, he said the research findings aren't very strong
REBECCA MOULDER>>conclusions were underwarranted, the influence was small and that lab results were artifical
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KELLY KROEPER>>that the research ocnducted was weak and was lab-based, rather than real-life based
TED GOERTZEL>>What did Michelle Cottle say a bout the effects of TV advertising on boys?
RODNEY WASHINGTON>>it has the same effect as it does on women
TED GOERTZEL>>Good, bad or indifferent?
DAVID WILSON>>bad
REBECCA MOULDER>>Magazines like 'Men's Health' is peddling the standard of male beauty as unforgiving and unrealistic as the female version of Elle
LAUREN DEL--CONTE>>bad
ANTHONY MANNELLO>>bad
TERRI ANN--SAUTTER>>bad
COLLEEN REDMAN>>bad
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>bad
REBECCA MOULDER>>bad
DARA SILICH>>bad
ASHLY BURLINGAME>>bad
KELLY KROEPER>>bad
CHRISTIE HENNING>>bad
VINCENZO CUTIETTA>>bad
TED GOERTZEL>>right, she said it is bad for both boys and girls
RYAN EVANS>>bad
TED GOERTZEL>>Which author said TV advertising with beautiful models is beneficial for girls?
TED GOERTZEL>>The answer is Kimberly Yumul ;-)
TED GOERTZEL>>Neither of the authors in the book did.
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>that's not gonna be a real question is it
TED GOERTZEL>>What were some of the myths that Herbert Schiller, the author of the mind managers, said were propagated by TV?
DARA SILICH>>social conflict
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>media neutrality, individualism absence of social conflict
REBECCA MOULDER>>The Myth of the Unchanging Human Nature
TED GOERTZEL>>OK, but it was the absence of social conflict
KELLY KROEPER>>Personal choice, social conflict, racial/ethnic stereotypes
ASHLY BURLINGAME>>individualism and personal choice
REBECCA MOULDER>>Myth of Absence of Social COnflict
DAVID WILSON>>absence of social conflict, nuerality of institution
LAUREN DEL--CONTE>>social conflict
TED GOERTZEL>>good, people seem to have that one.
VINCENZO CUTIETTA>>individualism and personal choice
REBECCA MOULDER>>Media Pluralism
TED GOERTZEL>>On the test, I mmight ask you for a brief summary of one of the articles.
RODNEY WASHINGTON>>which one of the articles?
TED GOERTZEL>>The test will have two parts: objective and essay.
TED GOERTZEL>>These will be two separate tests
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>is the objective just mulitple choice
TED GOERTZEL>>Rodney, it might be any one of the essays or there might be a choice.
TED GOERTZEL>>There are some fill in the blank questions too.
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RODNEY WASHINGTON>>give us an example please
TED GOERTZEL>>Let's try an essay: Take the following sentence "I have nothing to offer but courage, hard work and strong feelings.
TED GOERTZEL>>Rewrite that using bodily fluids as a metaphor
TED GOERTZEL>>Rodney, the questions on the quizes you did as homework are examples. I am resuing some.
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>I can only offer blood sweat and tears
TED GOERTZEL>>Shareda must have remembered that one.
MICHAEL BRADIS>>all i have is blood sweat and tears
KELLY KROEPER>>Blood,sweat and tear is all I have to offer
REBECCA MOULDER>>all I have are blood sweat and tears
DAVID WILSON>>I have nothing but sweat for courage, hard work and strong feelings
TED GOERTZEL>>Rewrite the following, "The grade on this test was influenced by a variety of different factors".
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>Several factors influenced my grade
VINCENZO CUTIETTA>>Several factors influenced the test grades
KATIE BRENNAN>>different factors influenced my grade
JILLIAN GRECO>>several factors influenced my garade
LAUREN DEL--CONTE>>several factors influenced my grade
COLLEEN REDMAN>>Different factors varied the test score
CHRISTIE HENNING>>Different factors will be the reflection of your grade
REBECCA MOULDER>>Several factors influenced my grade
ASHLY BURLINGAME>>Several factors influenced my grade
KELLY KROEPER>>Several factors influenced my test grade
TED GOERTZEL>>OK, the point was to start with a more positive statement, several factors.
RODNEY WASHINGTON>>my grade reflects my answers
TED GOERTZEL>>The question did not say anything about "my" grade, however.
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>so would that be wrong
DAVID WILSON>>Different factors influenced the grade on this test.
TED GOERTZEL>>Rewrite this one: Mona Lisa was painted by Leonardo Da Vinci
VINCENZO CUTIETTA>>Da Vinci painted the Mona Lisa
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>Da Vonci painted Mona Lisa
KELLY KROEPER>>Leonardo Divinci painted the Mona Lisa
TED GOERTZEL>>Good - he painted it.
REBECCA MOULDER>>Leonardo Da Vinci painted the Mona Lisa
ASHLY BURLINGAME>>Leonardo Da Vinci painted the MOna Lisa
RYAN EVANS>>Da Vinci painted the Mona Lisa
DAVID WILSON>>Leonardo Di vinci painted the Mona Lisa.
TED GOERTZEL>>How about "The arson unit conducted an investigation of the mysterious fire.
LAUREN DEL--CONTE>>Da Vinci painted Mona Lisa
KATIE BRENNAN>>da vinci painted the mona lisa
REBECCA MOULDER>>The fire was investigated by the arson unit.
TED GOERTZEL>>Let's have everybody on this one!
JILLIAN GRECO>>A mysterious fire was investigated by the arson unit
CHRISTIE HENNING>>The mysterious fire caused the arson unit to conduct an investigation
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>The mysterious fire was investigated
VINCENZO CUTIETTA>>The mysterious fire prompted an investigation
ASHLY BURLINGAME>>The mysterious fire was investigated by the arson unit
YEVGENYA POPOV>>The mysterious fire was investigated by the arson unit
MICHAEL BRADIS>>An investigation was counducted by arson
KATIE BRENNAN>>a mysterious fire was investigated by the arson unit
TERRI ANN--SAUTTER>>The fire was investigated by the arson unit.
KELLY KROEPER>>The mysterious fire was investigated by the arson unit
RYAN EVANS>>The arson unit investiated the fire
TED GOERTZEL>>OK
DAVID WILSON>>The fire was iinvestigated by the arson unit.
CHRISTIE HENNING>>The mysterious fired called for an investigation
DARA SILICH>>an investigation was conducted on the mysterious fire
COLLEEN REDMAN>>The mysterious fire was investigated by the arson unit.
TED GOERTZEL>>How about "There is another banking option that gives you free checking."
DARA SILICH>>free checking is another option
KELLY KROEPER>>Free checking is another banking option
TED GOERTZEL>>No, Coleen - keep it positive "The arson unit investigated the fire."
KATIE BRENNAN>>free checking is another option.
ASHLY BURLINGAME>>Free checking is another banking option
JILLIAN GRECO>>Free checking is yet another banking option that can be used.
REBECCA MOULDER>>Free checking is an option.
VINCENZO CUTIETTA>>Free checking is now another banking option
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>Free checking is another option
LAUREN DEL--CONTE>>free checking is another banking option
RYAN EVANS>>Free checking is availiable elsewhere
RODNEY WASHINGTON>>free checking is another option
COLLEEN REDMAN>>Free checking is another option.
TED GOERTZEL>>Right, free checking is another banking option.
TERRI ANN--SAUTTER>>Banking options can offer free checking.
CHRISTIE HENNING>>Many banking options give you free checking
DAVID WILSON>>Free cheching is another banking option.
KARLA BLEVINS>>totally free checking is another option
TED GOERTZEL>>How about "a not uncommon complaint among employers of new college graduates is that they cannot communicate effectively in writing"
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SHAREDA COLEMAN>>Employers often complain that college graduates don't write well
YEVGENYA POPOV>>Employers complain that new graduates cannot write effectively
JILLIAN GRECO>>a common complaint about new college graduates is thier poor writing skills
VINCENZO CUTIETTA>>A common compliant among employers is new college graduates can't effectively communicate inwriting
CHRISTIE HENNING>>Communicating effectively in writing is a common complaint
RODNEY WASHINGTON>>the complaint among employers is gradutes cannot write
KELLY KROEPER>>A frequent complaint of employers of new college graduates is their poor writing abilities
REBECCA MOULDER>>Employers complain that new college graduates cannot write effectively
TED GOERTZEL>>Jill's is better, but we could be more direct and positive.
TERRI ANN--SAUTTER>>Ineffective writing among college graduates is a common complaint among employers.
DAVID WILSON>>A uncommon complaint about college students is communicate.
LAUREN DEL--CONTE>>Employers complain that new college graduates cannot write effectively
TED GOERTZEL>>One might be Employers frequently complain that new college graduates cannot write effectively.
COLLEEN REDMAN>>Not being able to commuciate effectively in writing is a flaw in new college graduates by their employers.
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>i said that
TED GOERTZEL>>Another might be "employers value the rare college graduate who can write well"
TED GOERTZEL>>That one is even simpler.
TED GOERTZEL>>Anyone guess where I'm getting these?
REBECCA MOULDER>>The Penguin Book
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>the book
KIMBERLY YUMUL>>from the test
KELLY KROEPER>>the tests
RODNEY WASHINGTON>>professor i hope that you are lenient when we rewrite because how a person rephrases something is relative to their experience
TED GOERTZEL>>Yes, it is from the book.
TED GOERTZEL>>Actually, there are some basic principles of rewriting that are different from your everyday experience
TED GOERTZEL>>If you find a new way that seems better, I'm happy with that.
TED GOERTZEL>>Who could write a sentence using parallel structure?
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>i'll try
TED GOERTZEL>>go ahead
VINCENZO CUTIETTA>>i dont have my penguin book with me, what's parallel structure?
TED GOERTZEL>>OK, here's an example from the book.
TED GOERTZEL>>It means saying two parts of the sentence in the same way.
TED GOERTZEL>>Here is one you can rewrite.
TED GOERTZEL>>Give me liberty or you might as well just execute me.
VINCENZO CUTIETTA>>Give me liberty or give me death
KELLY KROEPER>>give me liberty or give me death
REBECCA MOULDER>>give me liberty of give me death
TED GOERTZEL>>Rewrite that one.
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>give me liberty or give me death
TED GOERTZEL>>Correct, liberty was one word, a parallel structure would also use one word, not a wordy phrase
ASHLY BURLINGAME>>Give me liberty or give me death
RODNEY WASHINGTON>>give me freedom or give me death
KATIE BRENNAN>>give me liberty or give me death
DAVID WILSON>>Give me liberty or give me death.
LAUREN DEL--CONTE>>give me liberty or give me death
TED GOERTZEL>>How about No one means all he says, yet most of us say much less than we would l ike to get across
REBECCA MOULDER>>say what you mean and mean what you say
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>say what you mean and mean what you say
RODNEY WASHINGTON>>say waht you mean and mean what you say
KATIE BRENNAN>>say what you mean and mean what you say
ASHLY BURLINGAME>>Say what you mean and mean what you say
KELLY KROEPER>>Mean what you say and say what you mean
LAUREN DEL--CONTE>>say what you mean and mean what you say
KIMBERLY YUMUL>>say what u mean and mean what you say
TED GOERTZEL>>Good. How about "If a free society cannot help the many who are poor, it cannot save the few with large quantities of wealth
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>to deny the poor is to deny the rich
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>?
RODNEY WASHINGTON>>give to the rich and take form the poor
TED GOERTZEL>>Right, Shareda, rich is parallel to poor.
KELLY KROEPER>>If you cant save the poor, then you cant save the rich
KELLY KROEPER>>?
DAVID WILSON>>If society cannot help the many that are poor, how can it help the few that are rich.
KATIE BRENNAN>>are the parallel structures that are going to be on our test, from the book?
TED GOERTZEL>>How about "In today's global economy, the method of production and where factories are located has become relatively important in comparison to the creation of new concepts and marketing those concepts
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>?
TED GOERTZEL>>Simplify that
TED GOERTZEL>>Make it more parallel
TED GOERTZEL>>Do better than page 342 in the book ;-0
VINCENZO CUTIETTA>>this is gonna be a difficult midterm isn't it? i have no idea where to begin simplifying that in parallel structure
REBECCA MOULDER>>location and production are just as important as concepts
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>the method of production is just as important as the method of marketing
JILLIAN GRECO>>we learn from today to prepare for tomorrow?
ANTHONY MANNELLO>>production and location is as important as concepts
TED GOERTZEL>>You folks are changing the meaning, reversing it.
COLLEEN REDMAN>>Production is as important as marketing
TED GOERTZEL>>How about In today's global economy how good are made and where they are produced is less important than creating and marketing new concepts."
RODNEY WASHINGTON>>by increasing the method of production we create more concepts for marketing
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>how is that parrallel
TED GOERTZEL>>That is better than the one in the book, I think.
LAUREN DEL--CONTE>>How goods are made and where they are produced creating new concepts and marketing those concepts
TED GOERTZEL>>Lauren's is close to what the book does.
KELLY KROEPER>>Location of production is important in the creation of new products
TED GOERTZEL>>These questions are probably harder than the ones on the test.
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>good
KATIE BRENNAN>>thats good to hear
TED GOERTZEL>>Let's try an example of a fill-in question. What TV show is analyzed by Donald Bogle in his essay on stereotypes of blacks on TV?
KELLY KROEPER>>Martin
JILLIAN GRECO>>martin
KIMBERLY YUMUL>>Martin
ASHLY BURLINGAME>>martin
DAVID WILSON>>Martin
KATIE BRENNAN>>martin
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>Martin
RYAN EVANS>>Martin
LAUREN DEL--CONTE>>Martin
COLLEEN REDMAN>>Martin
CHRISTIE HENNING>>martin
REBECCA MOULDER>>Martin
TED GOERTZEL>>What antarctic bird authored our writing book?
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>penguin
VINCENZO CUTIETTA>>penguin
TERRI ANN--SAUTTER>>penguin
ASHLY BURLINGAME>>penguin
REBECCA MOULDER>>Pengiun
LAUREN DEL--CONTE>>penguin
RYAN EVANS>>penguin
RODNEY WASHINGTON>>pengin
DAVID WILSON>>penquin
KELLY KROEPER>>penguin
COLLEEN REDMAN>>penguin
KIMBERLY YUMUL>>penguin
KARLA BLEVINS>>penguin
KATIE BRENNAN>>penguin
RYAN EVANS>>parrot
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>lol
VINCENZO CUTIETTA>>flamingos!
TED GOERTZEL>>Here is another one. How many paragraphs in a five paragraph essay?
REBECCA MOULDER>>5
KELLY KROEPER>>5
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>5
LAUREN DEL--CONTE>>5
CHRISTIE HENNING>>5
TERRI ANN--SAUTTER>>5
YEVGENYA POPOV>>five
DAVID WILSON>>five
JILLIAN GRECO>>5
VINCENZO CUTIETTA>>4 +1
KATIE BRENNAN>>5
COLLEEN REDMAN>>5
KIMBERLY YUMUL>>5
KARLA BLEVINS>>five
JILLIAN GRECO>>I like that one
ASHLY BURLINGAME>>5
TED GOERTZEL>>How many sentences in each paragraph?
RODNEY WASHINGTON>>5
KELLY KROEPER>>5
JILLIAN GRECO>>5
KATIE BRENNAN>>5
REBECCA MOULDER>>5
ASHLY BURLINGAME>>5
RYAN EVANS>>5
YEVGENYA POPOV>>5
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>5
CHRISTIE HENNING>>5
KARLA BLEVINS>>five
MICHAEL BRADIS>>5
DAVID WILSON>>5
COLLEEN REDMAN>>5
KIMBERLY YUMUL>>5
LAUREN DEL--CONTE>>5
VINCENZO CUTIETTA>>3-6
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>i hope yuo put some of these on the test
LAUREN DEL--CONTE>>these questions should be on the test
RODNEY WASHINGTON>>what is the correct answer to that last ?
REBECCA MOULDER>>test
TED GOERTZEL>>How many sentences altogether?
TED GOERTZEL>>Is this jammed up?
RODNEY WASHINGTON>>answer to the last ? is
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>hello
RODNEY WASHINGTON>>
REBECCA MOULDER>>25
KATIE BRENNAN>>25
KELLY KROEPER>>25
TERRI ANN--SAUTTER>>25
KIMBERLY YUMUL>>25
LAUREN DEL--CONTE>>25
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>25
KARLA BLEVINS>>25
ASHLY BURLINGAME>>25
CHRISTIE HENNING>>25
DAVID WILSON>>25
TED GOERTZEL>>Do any of you have a question for me?
VINCENZO CUTIETTA>>what's your favorite color?
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>can you give another question from global brain
KIMBERLY YUMUL>>how many questions are gunna be on the test?
TED GOERTZEL>>Black, to match my disposition.
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>lol
VINCENZO CUTIETTA>>very nice
TED GOERTZEL>>I think there are about 25 questions on the multiple choice/objective and half a dozen on the essay.
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>when is the transcript gonna be posted or can i just print it now
TED GOERTZEL>>But I might change it up to the last minute.
KIMBERLY YUMUL>>ok
TED GOERTZEL>>I'll post the transcript right away, certainly after my methods class if not before.
REBECCA MOULDER>>how long do they essays have to be?
CHRISTIE HENNING>>what are you going to ask in the essay?
REBECCA MOULDER>>the*
KATIE BRENNAN>>everything is coming form the book? for exmaple, your parallel structure questions?
TED GOERTZEL>>One essay question might be to summarize one of the essays.
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>r u gonna focus on global brain alot
VINCENZO CUTIETTA>>and how long do the essays have to be?
TED GOERTZEL>>Shared, that's a good idea, I didn't think of that.
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>i wasn't suggesting it
KIMBERLY YUMUL>>are u going to grade the test like you graded methods
KIMBERLY YUMUL>>2 differnt scores?
TED GOERTZEL>>If there are no more question, I'll sign off and post the transcript.
TED GOERTZEL>>Yes, Kimberly, there will be two different scores as well as a weighted total score.
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>yes
KIMBERLY YUMUL>>ok
VINCENZO CUTIETTA>>how long do expect our essays to be
TED GOERTZEL>>You'll get the score on the objective test right away, the other will come a bit later after I read them.
TED GOERTZEL>>The essays will be short, some one sentence, the longest five sentences.
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>yes
RYAN EVANS>>yessssss
DAVID WILSON>>what room will the test be in.
KIMBERLY YUMUL>>ryan ure weird
SHAREDA COLEMAN>>ok can you post this now
TED GOERTZEL>>The test will be in 108 BSB where there are enough computers for everyone.
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KATIE BRENNAN>>
KATIE BRENNAN>>
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TED GOERTZEL>>Ok, everybody, h ave a good weekend.
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REBECCA MOULDER>>you too
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RODNEY WASHINGTON>>you too
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RYAN EVANS>>gr8 bye ttyl
KIMBERLY YUMUL>>u 2
LAUREN DEL--CONTE>>bye!
KELLY KROEPER>>bye, have a good weekend
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SHAHRIAR MAHMUD>>see ya
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SHAREDA COLEMAN>>buh-bye
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